You had one of the best introductions. I can tell you put thought into your selections. Some of your picture choices were fabulous. I loved the tomato festival pictures as well as the color festival ones. You sound like a girl who loves to party. Your citation page was well done. The background music for this page was a good choice. However, it was not a good choice for the NYC section. It drowned your voice out in that section. Your speaking volume was too low in some parts. 94%
it was all really cool especially the holi and tomato festival. but on florence it got really quiet.
ReplyDeleteNice video but a little quite at the end
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DeleteI loved it! I loved your ideas and it made me rethink/add stuff to my bucket list! It was really creative! Good Job Abbie :)
ReplyDeleteYou had one of the best introductions. I can tell you put thought into your selections. Some of your picture choices were fabulous. I loved the tomato festival pictures as well as the color festival ones. You sound like a girl who loves to party. Your citation page was well done. The background music for this page was a good choice. However, it was not a good choice for the NYC section. It drowned your voice out in that section. Your speaking volume was too low in some parts. 94%
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